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    Inactive Member Oz's Avatar
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    Well, well, well. Its been a long time. And I just want to say thank you to everyone who had been around, everyone whose works Ive had the privelage of reading. I dunno if any of the old timers remember, but back in the day, part of my sig used to be "Supporting gollum as the best poet in the world" or something like that... Well, Ive been reading through my journal lately, and I rediscovered the reason that I think that. And I want to post it here so that anyone who hasnt read it will get the chance to. Everyone, read this. Gollum, thank you. And without further ado:


    Chris

    i taught myself today how
    to slide down bannisters
    and railing like
    you always do
    with your left hand tucked
    under the railing behind you
    just in case
    and your right hand up
    for balance and your
    legs out and your head up
    and with you in mind i
    did not walk down the
    last four steps, instead
    i hopped up on the
    railing running down
    the middle of these marble
    stairs and slid
    down to the bottom, my
    butt sliding along the
    polished wooden handrail
    and the little lip at
    the bottom slowed me down
    suddenly and as i jumped
    off i wondered why i
    chose today at
    age nineteen to slide
    down the bannister like
    you but maybe

    it is my way of saying
    "i'm sorry" to you when
    you're not around.


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    "What about him? What are you doing with him?"
    "What you should be doing with me..."

    Proud family member of Jelymo, gollum, Kelly, Dano, Jaxom27, 5Cats, Fenix and others.

    I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned

    "Om Namaha Shivaya." ~ Dano

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    Cool

    I can see it, Oz, and the image made me smile. Very cool.

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    Smile

    That's a lovely poem.

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    I like this one a lot.

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    "I've had to spend the majority of my life vigilant against the thoughts and emotions of others pentrating my mind. But just this once, as the psychic dam begins to burst, I dont try to stop it... because the only emotion that comes crashing through the breakwall...
    is hope.
    It washes over everyone. Infectious... growing in strength...
    Connecting us... uniting us... until suddenly...
    strangers dont seem so strange anymore."
    Jean Grey- X Men # 71

    PROUD SLAVEBOY OF JELYMO

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    It's a story. I feel like asking for more. It'd rude. But your words grow attachment to them. They beg for more. Or maybe that's just me.

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    Just a little quick note since Im noticing something here that I tried to avoid:

    THIS POEM IS BY GOLLUM.

    sorry, i tried to make that clear in the first post, but i want to make sure everyone gets it. I love gollum and her poetry. smile

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    "What about him? What are you doing with him?"
    "What you should be doing with me..."

    Proud family member of Jelymo, gollum, Kelly, Dano, Jaxom27, 5Cats, Fenix and others.

    I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned

    "Om Namaha Shivaya." ~ Dano

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    Wink

    Well hell, not our fault that you did not make it clear. -whacks you outside the head-

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    Yeah what she said(CC). A very personal tone to it, which is why I love it.

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    "I've had to spend the majority of my life vigilant against the thoughts and emotions of others pentrating my mind. But just this once, as the psychic dam begins to burst, I dont try to stop it... because the only emotion that comes crashing through the breakwall...
    is hope.
    It washes over everyone. Infectious... growing in strength...
    Connecting us... uniting us... until suddenly...
    strangers dont seem so strange anymore."
    Jean Grey- X Men # 71

    PROUD SLAVEBOY OF JELYMO

    Enter Daredevil at Hero Realm

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    *blush*

    thanks again, Oz. and for those of you who aren't already aware of this, Oz is pretty damned kool.

    *reads Fenix's message again and begins giggling at the idea of whacking Oz inside the head...*

    -g

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    Sometimes i think everyone on this board is crazy. The rest of the time i'm sure. -Dan
    somehow i see [gollum] clinging to a tower and rousingly calling for a new world order. -starky

    food is food & sex is sex
    i'vehadmyfill
    iwanttodefect
    -ra di o he(a)d

    [This message has been edited by gollum (edited November 01, 2000).]

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    Thanks to gollum for the compliment, and nice new sig Fenix. That made me laugh.

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    "What about him? What are you doing with him?"
    "What you should be doing with me..."

    Proud family member of Jelymo, gollum, Kelly, Dano, Jaxom27, 5Cats, Fenix and others.

    I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned

    "Om Namaha Shivaya." ~ Dano

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